In a society where you can not do anything without being watched almost eliminates ones desire to take radical risks which may change your life however Winston decides to take a life altering chance at possibly attain love.
Winston had run into an injured girl, who worked for the “Ministry of Truth”, who slipped Winston a small pressed paper in his hand. With great anxiety to open the message Winston knew he could not make any sort of usual movement which would Big Brother could notice. Eventually Winston had read the note which read “I Love You”.
Realizing he possibly had a chance of love, which he had only fantasized about in his dreams, Winston knew he had to react on this however he was puzzled as to how he could privately meet with this women without getting caught and possible being vaporized. After finally meeting this mysterious woman who apparently loved Winston was with great degree of difficulty. Winston had to exercise great caution as he could not look directly into the eye of the women. Even living in a world full of suppression and suspicion of every action, Winston still took a massive risk of seeing this woman as he knew he had to quickly jump on the opportunity to meet someone who also did not like the ideas of the party. Winston’s love for Julie continued to grow even though she was considered “corrupt”.
When something is deemed evil or deemed “ungood”, it makes the opposing forces try much hard to successfully accomplish their goal. The power of love is hard to stop as anyone who desires to interfere will mostly likely regret the day they impeded.
3 comments:
Your ideas in this post are very interesting. People are willing to take a huge risk for something they desire or care about. You illustrated your ideas thoughtfully. A couple of grammar errors jumped out. A couple of times you alternate tenses. You use verbs in both the past and the present tense in your writing and it's a bit distracting. Also you have a few run on sentences that could be split into two sentences. Something I thought to be very clever was the use of the Newspeak work "ungood". It strengthened the connection of your ideas to the novel.
Good introduction and conclusion (Avoid using "you" in your paragraph). You have strong supports.
both conclusion and intro and great. support is really evident, and really explains what you are thinking, good job
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