The love for someone can emotionally change every individual’s beliefs. People who are in love will stop at nothing to achieve what they want. The power of love is very strong and almost just about impossible to destroy.
Winston and Julia begin to meet on many occasions. Julia and Winston’s feelings for each other continues to grow; the more Men that Julia had slept with the more Winston loved her. One might think that a Man would get upset, however Julia’s defiance towards the party just makes Julia that much more lovable for Winston.
While reading this section it was almost as if Winston and Julia were having an affair. Winston had to rent a room above Mr. Carrington’s shop in order to make love with Julia. The thought of an affair is brought up because it almost looked that way as Winston and Julie had to hide what they were actually doing.
Loving someone can really make people defy strong and strict orders. Most people will do anything in order to continue their secretive relationship even if the consequences of being discovered are really high and dangerous.
3 comments:
Good introduction and attention getter, however, your thoughts in your introduction werent supported in the body. A little revision will make this post good to great.
Your original idea presented in the introduction is interesting. Your entire introduction is good but in the body of your writing you go on a tangent explaining Julia and Winston's relationship as an affair. It doesn't seem to support your thesis. Overall it was a good start, but you might want to think about explaining one idea more thoroughly rather than having multiple, unfinished ideas.
Strong introduction and conclusion. Great attention getter, but your support is not strong as your introduction.
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